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Thursday, August 21, 2008

~Exotic Beauties of Yours~


These two exotic beauties
Showed me their language with the scripts of feelings;
Taught me the Chapters
Of various emotions;
Love,joy,care,courage
making me envision the world.
Though these beauties belong to you,
They paved the way to the colourful world of happiness-
Your heart I would say.
Oh! sweet and lovely eyes of Yours.

-Priyaa Iyer

42 comments:

  1. Siddharth BoseAugust 21, 2008 at 5:06 PM

    nice post....just change the header of your blog, it dosent match with your template

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  2. Bleeding wordsAugust 21, 2008 at 5:17 PM

    @siddharth bose

    Thanks

    Cheers

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  3. VarunAugust 21, 2008 at 5:19 PM

    Not really a poetry guy,but I thought it was nice:)

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  4. Jil Jil RamamaniAugust 21, 2008 at 5:21 PM

    Nice verse ... interesting one

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  5. Bleeding wordsAugust 21, 2008 at 5:22 PM

    @varun

    Thanks

    You know this is my 1st poetry

    your post makes me to improve my writing!

    Thanks a lot!
    cheers

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  6. Bleeding wordsAugust 21, 2008 at 5:23 PM

    @hakuna

    Thanks

    Cheers

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  7. RinzuAugust 21, 2008 at 6:23 PM

    WOW... REALLY NICE POEM...

    AS IN I KNOW IT COMES STARIGHT FROM THE HEART OF A PEROSN IN LOVE...

    I WRITE A LOTTT ABOUT LOVE TOO...

    HERE ARE MY BLOGS ON LOVE:

    www.thepoetskiss.blogspot.com
    www.anodetomyfirstandlastlove.blogspot.com

    i hope u would enjoy reading them... meanhwile keep ur the poetry... i would come back for more...

    tk cr

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  8. KartzAugust 21, 2008 at 6:52 PM

    Not a bad start!
    "Though these beauties belong to you,
    They paved the way to the colourful world of happiness"- well stated...

    Cherio...

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  9. Bleeding wordsAugust 21, 2008 at 7:03 PM

    @rinzu

    Hey i studied ur poems and post

    they were good

    i added u in my page!

    thanks

    Cheers

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  10. Bleeding wordsAugust 21, 2008 at 7:04 PM

    @kartz

    Thanks

    I will keep trying to excel ok?

    Cheers

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  11. KishoreAugust 22, 2008 at 4:40 PM

    Well..nice start..

    One thing wanna mention (if u req. feedback)is u were referring to "me" in the first few lines and finally you say it "Yours"..
    If it read "Oh! My sweet and lovely eyes!" It would have been a lil apt i feel...

    Thanks

    PS: I m nt a poet .. :-)

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  12. Bleeding wordsAugust 22, 2008 at 4:56 PM

    @kishore g

    Actually i tried this !

    Like as if im telling this to a person whose eyes I have described!


    just a try!

    Cheers
    thanks

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  13. Vivek MenonAugust 22, 2008 at 5:22 PM

    beautiful poem...I see an certain innocence many of your posts..Hope you can keep it always...

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  14. LaasyaAugust 22, 2008 at 6:37 PM

    I don't know how people ever come up with poems. I try so hard and can't even get to the first word! And it doesn't really look like your virgin attempt. So, well done! I love the pic!

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  15. Bleeding wordsAugust 22, 2008 at 7:34 PM

    @vivek memon

    Thanks

    Cheers

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  16. Bleeding wordsAugust 22, 2008 at 7:35 PM

    @dame folle

    I have felt a lot like wat u felt !

    still I have the thought

    yet started trying!

    anyway thank you!

    Cheers

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  17. AnonymousAugust 22, 2008 at 10:53 PM

    Wow that was a nice Poem about EYES I should say...., It was realy good...., I juz don't believe that it's your first poem,It's good....., I am not a good annotator , SO I ll just leave your poem like that.....,

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  18. Ranjeet Kr. VimalAugust 22, 2008 at 11:19 PM

    i cant comment..coz u already hv 17 comments..nice

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  19. Bleeding wordsAugust 23, 2008 at 8:36 AM

    @antony a john

    Thanks a lot for visiting my web
    keep commenting my works

    thanks

    cheers

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  20. Bleeding wordsAugust 23, 2008 at 8:36 AM

    @ranjeet

    Thanks

    cheers

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  21. VinayakAugust 23, 2008 at 2:39 PM

    Nice post \

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  22. Bleeding wordsAugust 23, 2008 at 3:03 PM

    @vinayak

    Thanks

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  23. Abhinav ViswambharanAugust 23, 2008 at 3:21 PM

    A simple and sweet poem. Nice outlook. :)

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  24. Bleeding wordsAugust 23, 2008 at 3:47 PM

    @Abhinav Viswambharan

    thanks

    cheers

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  25. Matangi MawleyAugust 23, 2008 at 3:56 PM

    good start! :) bt my take on beauty is a lil different..

    http://allsettodonothing.blogspot.com/2007/01/where-is-beauty.html

    cheers!

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  26. Dan*August 23, 2008 at 5:23 PM

    nice romantic poem :)

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  27. Bleeding wordsAugust 23, 2008 at 6:18 PM

    @matangi

    Thanks

    Cheers

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  28. Bleeding wordsAugust 23, 2008 at 6:19 PM

    @dan

    Thanks

    cheers

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  29. RajeshAugust 24, 2008 at 9:15 AM

    Hi Priya Iyer...dropped in from Matangi's

    Well...I truly loved reading...u taught me how to convey things articulately wit jus a short write-up...loved those expression of emotions..and the pic was too good...hope u don mind me blog rolling u :)

    P.S: Do visit my blog...hope it interests u

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  30. Bleeding wordsAugust 24, 2008 at 11:11 AM

    @rajesh

    Thanks for the lovely comment!

    I visited ur blog

    It was good!

    Neat one too!

    Keep blogging

    Cheers

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  31. AnonymousAugust 25, 2008 at 6:11 PM

    Hi sweetie.....

    Its a commendable effort.Best of luck with future efforts.

    Regards,
    A.Rajalaxmi

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  32. Bleeding wordsAugust 25, 2008 at 7:31 PM

    @rajalaxmi

    THanks akka!

    cheers
    !

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  33. SampathAugust 25, 2008 at 9:15 PM

    good one man.....nice one..i am bad at poetry but still managed

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  34. Bleeding wordsAugust 25, 2008 at 9:34 PM

    @sampath

    thanks

    even i bad

    cheers

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  35. KarmasuraAugust 26, 2008 at 7:16 AM

    simple.. and brilliant..

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  36. AnonymousAugust 26, 2008 at 7:44 AM

    Really nice di...keep it up..

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  37. Bleeding wordsAugust 26, 2008 at 9:06 AM

    @attila

    thanks

    cheers

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  38. Bleeding wordsAugust 26, 2008 at 9:07 AM

    @shivasankary

    Thanks d!

    Cheers

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  39. AnonymousAugust 26, 2008 at 9:26 AM

    Nice poem for a first timer! Keep writing!!

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  40. Bleeding wordsAugust 26, 2008 at 10:55 AM

    @manikandan

    Thanks'

    cheers

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  41. AnonymousNovember 26, 2010 at 5:15 AM

    Hello, you site is very funny he told me to cheer up .. Merry Christmas.

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  42. AnonymousJanuary 7, 2011 at 12:52 PM

    Good article. Thank you.

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